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Tears
By: Ash
6-18-04

Sitting quietly
Heart begins to pound
Throat gets tight
Each breath is harder to take
All emotions begin to show
Sadness, pain
This feeling has become too familiar
You close your eyes and everything lets go
You hang you head and it begins to fall
Leaving it's trail upon your cheek
As the tears of your true emotions flow like a stream
Gently kissing your cheek you look back up
He says he loves you one last time
And before you can say anything, he leaves
Gone forever
It happens to everyone. But I wrote it "Just Beacause".
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Elerrina Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2004
this reminds me of when me n my ex split up.
i tried to write bout it ... but i think yours comes off better.

nice image to. :hug:
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darknessincarnate21 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2004
ownage poem luv, told ya ppl would love your stuff! i think u should try writing in rhyme now, at least once. mix that with ur great writing and you've got an exremely uberownage poem! **Note: no one here understands what im saying except for me and ash...lol

Bravo!
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Missy39811 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004
Excellent poem! You really know how to express emotions well. you are a great writer. I love that picture as well.

"Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life"

From Missy
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Illistrauthor Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004
You know what...I think your worthy of my first fav! Yes. :+fav:
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Illistrauthor Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004
Oh wow, I've been trying to describe crying once - You did such a beautiful job! Brilliant. :D
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cutalittledeeper Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004
This was beautiful. Adding it to my favorites. *Nods*
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Yunalesca-Strife Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004
oh man... thats so sad... but so true....
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quixoticDelusions Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004   Photographer
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