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My Savior and Destroyer

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My Savior once brought me out of my cold and loveless heart,
but now drags me deeper and deeper within.
My Savior guided me to the warmth of the light,
but now guides me to the frost of the dark.
My Savior once held me up,
but now only pushes me farther down.
My Savior has now become my Destroyer.
Been coming back and forth to this with different idesa for a few days now. Just finished it. Not my best work, but I'm happy with it. It's from the heart and gets the point across.

(sorry again, no pretty pics)
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iamsplee's avatar
Amazing how closely I can associate with your poetry.

I really like this one...the repetition holds it together well.